Gabriel - basketball player.
Richie - Basketball player.
Ansh - supporter for Gabriel.
Isaac - supporter for Richie.
Ansh and isaac talk to their team that they support and then richie and gabriel play a game of basketball and then the problem is when gabriel wins and then richie gets mad then starts a fight and then isaac encourages richie to keep on fighting and ansh says to stop and then isaac and ansh start a conflict and then it becomes a massive conflict.
maybe more description in your story and maybe some full stop to if you could cause it could make the story more descriptive
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