One day well the sun went down captainvaux went for walk to the beach with his dog max and they had a stop and sat down on a comfortable rock and looked at the sun go down as he patted his dog max soft and luxurious brown fur. Well the sun was going down they watched the small waves shiver past them.
One day I went for a walk to the beach to the beach and sat down on rock.
I like that you use discreditable words.
ReplyDeleteI don't like that you didn't use paragraphs.
I liked that you used describing words
DeleteWhat I didn't like is that you didn't use paragraph s
Jnaya
I like that you used describing words
ReplyDeleteI didn't like that you did not use paragraph.